http://razzmatazz.mgis.in/traffic/cell-phone-driving/my-commercial-on-cell-phone-driving/ Speak up India! Thu, 09 Feb 2012 22:36:15 +0000 hourly 1 http://razzmatazz.mgis.in/traffic/cell-phone-driving/my-commercial-on-cell-phone-driving/comment-page-1/#comment-29 Marisha Tue, 21 Apr 2009 06:53:56 +0000 http://razzmatazz.mgis.in/?p=942#comment-29 I really liked the issue you have chosen to speak about because using cell phones 24X7 has become so common, we hardly think about it. But it is a major cause of road accidents and a reminder that we do not follow the basic traffic rules. Your commercial is very effective in communicating the message. It puts across your point very succinctly. However, you could probably improve on the technical aspects in editing. One of the things you could work on is the transitions between the scenes. You could make it smoother by using appropriate fading effects. You could also work on your background score by using appropriate sound effects. I really liked the issue you have chosen to speak about because using cell phones 24X7 has become so common, we hardly think about it. But it is a major cause of road accidents and a reminder that we do not follow the basic traffic rules. Your commercial is very effective in communicating the message. It puts across your point very succinctly. However, you could probably improve on the technical aspects in editing. One of the things you could work on is the transitions between the scenes. You could make it smoother by using appropriate fading effects. You could also work on your background score by using appropriate sound effects.

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